I thought that perhaps it would be fun to post a couple of snippets from my writing in January (‘Snippets of Story’ is a monthly event held at Katie’s blog – Whisperings of the Pen). The latter half of Febuary is going to be quite busy and my writing will probably suffer a wee bit for it – but still, c’est la vie. It doesn’t matter how much I write as long as I’m still writing …
Timothy’s head ached. Nay – this was false; Timothy’s head was being pulverised by a battering ram, clobbered with a hundred cudgels and thrashed by a thousand knaves.
He sat with his head in his hands, leaning on his knees. He felt ill – sick. He never felt sick. He glared at the beam where his blood stained the wood. It looked horrific and he was somewhat oddly cheered by the gruesome sight – it befitted the injury it had bestowed upon him.
– The Many Trials of a Blacksmith
“That senseless man!” Leon gripped Robert’s right shoulder. “We’d best leave.”
“Why?” he asked, bewildered.
“Because she’s coming now; perhaps to beach where we stand. Bah! Fool of a man – son of loon and ostrich, head of mud and mind of spittle; to come now in such mists. Curse him!”
– The Many Trials of a Blacksmith
The chatter in the room ceased as her father entered. He gave a brief nod to his children – to which one it was hard to tell as it was rather an all compassing nod: Good morning, it said. I hope you haven’t shamed me overnight. Oh, by the way, I wish to tell you that I hold some affection towards you all. Not much – forgive me for having a whole kingdom to protect and love and not having enough to pat and kiss your heads. But in my own way, deep down (very, very deep down) I love you. Each one. Even you, Nell.
She was a fanciful creature, she decided as she returned his nod (though he was seating himself at the time and thus was quite unaware of it).
– Unlikely
These snippets are riveting! I love your use of potent, descriptive language. You’ve locked my attention and I can’t wait to read more from you!
Thank you 🙂
These snippets were great! You obviously had a good writing month 😀 It was all really good but, ‘Timothy’s head ached. Nay – this was false; Timothy’s head was being pulverised by a battering ram, clobbered with a hundred cudgels and thrashed by a thousand knaves.’ Was the best description of a headache I have ever read!
Haha … that scene is me being very mean to my character … poor fellow!
I nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award, no need to participate, it was just to let you know I enjoy your blog 🙂 https://awriterslifeformeblog.wordpress.com/2014/02/10/versatile-blogger-award/
Oh thank you 😀
Oh my! These are fantastic snippets, Thusblewthewind (sorry, I don’t know your name!). I love your descriptive language, and the way you thrust me into the scene/character despite it being a ‘snippet’ and despite my not knowing a single solitary thing about ‘The Many Trials of A Blacksmith’ and ‘Unlikely’. I love what I’m reading though…
The one with Timothy’s headache and his injury – that’s a favourite. Very good writing!!
God bless!
^_^
Joy @ joy-live4jesus.blogspot.com
Thank you very much 😀 God bless you too.